Sounds good.
Might sell better with the protagonist learning iron age leatherworking, with hides tanned from cows that were grown within earshot, as part of a process of finding the real root of the reason for why any of us ever came to be in the first place. This realization process culminates in the formation of a global, unified steampunk BDSM movement and a wealth of new diseases, and then: Zombies.
(That's the end. Zombies are always the end.)
Sorry, but compared with the parent, my money is in you ssl-3. Do you get better results from prompting by being more poetic?
This is somewhat similar to a Piers Anthony series that I suspect noone has ever read except for me.
What was with that guy anyway.