I think it read well, perhaps too intimidating for some to get into after the first couple paragraphs, but i think it's pretty much tailored at the audience here. I'm resistant to calling it obviously AI as well, the ideas are well thought out and it flows just fine, its certainly not a "here my article title and 2 sentence overview of whats its about, now write it", level of assistance, which i think your comment is kinda making it seem as though it is.