I've seen way, way worse. Either someone LLM-polished something they already wrote, or they did their own manual editing pass.
The short sentence construction is the most suspicious, but I actually don't see anything glaring. It normally jumps out and hits me in the face.
>Hemingway's 4 Fast Rules For Effective Writing
1. Use Short Sentences
https://www.wordsthatsing.com.au/post/hemingway-rules