> it — a crisis not of computer science but of procurement

> a subtype — not in the object-oriented sense of a type that extends another, but in the mathematical sense of a constrained set

A number of em dashes and "not X, but Y" constructs unfortunately, sometimes even right next to each other like the above.

I'm not convinced this work is wholly AI but it has at least the smell of augmentation or assistance, and a sloppy mindset in terms overseeing it. That indicates a lack of investment from the author which I always think is... unfortunate as a reader, to say the least.