It would be more concise and the analysis section at the end would be more useful. I still read it I just hate reading articles online knowing I could have run a chatgpt deep research to the same effect.

It would be written by a human.

From https://news.ycombinator.com/newsguidelines.html:

> Don't post generated comments or AI-edited comments. HN is for conversation between humans.

It's poorly structured. I think a better split between technical vs social measures and how they interact would result in a much better article. It also doesn't seem to even mention DPI or great firewall of China as prior art.