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hnlmorgyesterday at 8:26 PM5 repliesview on HN

Some people wrote like that before LLMs polluted the water.

Just like people used em dashes before LLMs.

I used bullet points heavily before LLMs.


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thechaoyesterday at 9:26 PM

I felt personally attacked when LLMs came out: I'm an avid user of "—", bullets, numbered lists, and the word "delve". It's been a miserable couple of years.

flkiwiyesterday at 10:42 PM

LLMs write like that because people wrote like that. Enough, unfortunately for my remaining love of humanity, to cause the LLMs to adopt the quirk.

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mikepurvisyesterday at 9:00 PM

Many many years ago I wrote a book for Apress, and the style guide for that instilled in me a lot of practices that now make my writing feel LLM-ish to some readers:

- Use bulleted lists, but always introduce and conclude a list with prose; a list can't immediately follow a heading or end a section.

- Use a mix of long and short sentences; in long sentences with parentheticals, use a mix of commas, parens, semicolons, and em dashes.

- With multiple continuous blocks of prose that aren't naturally broken up by an illustration or heading, start a paragraph with an inline bold statement to help anchor the reader.

sublinearyesterday at 8:36 PM

I still use bullets extensively. You can easily tell when a human writes them when they are trees instead of lists.

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wyreyesterday at 8:32 PM

For sure, but I don't think I'm going to give Vercel benefit of the doubt that they aren't writing their copy with an LLM.