It's the writing of someone who has been writing articles like this for decades now, instead of your average blogger or journalist. Just enjoy the difference.

To me, as a non-native speaker it feels like a series of interruptions and focus changes with no natural flow. Hard to follow.

It's that opening paragraph.

> Coffee in hand, I sit down in the Cave. Any Tuesday during the work week, a sip, and I parse the calendar.

How many Tuesdays are there in his work week?

This is just how he writes. Busy-executive-bullet-point style. Its not AI.

Terminal LinkedIn brain

Very. Short. Sentences. That’s AI

Look up the organizational chart meme. Look at Amazon's chart. You'll know what's off.