alt Hacker NewsI was not a fan of the writing style of the proof. There seem to be some irrelevant details: Is the mention of 8-flow at all relevant? I, at least, found the definition of L on the first line of the proof of Lemma 2.2 to be needlessly inscrutable, and my thesis advisor would have likely stopped reading there and told me to fix it.
Maybe someone should ask the model to make a more clearly written and thus easy to verify proof :)
I was confused at first when you asked if the 8-flow is relevant, when like, the 8-flow is a key input that the cycle double cover is built out of. Then I realized, oh, I guess technically they're not using the 8-flow, they're using the Z_2^3-flow. But like. The existence of an 8-flow and the existence of a Z_2^3-flow are equivalent, and I gather most graph theorists are going to talk about it in terms of the existence of an 8-flow, so noting that having a Z_2^3-flow is equivalent to having an 8-flow helps the reader to put this information in context.
I'm not sure why you find this proof so hard to read. I found it mostly quite readable (and the definition of L is straightforward? I wouldn't have written it quite that way but it's hardly inscrutable), although I feel like some parts are maybe lacking some exposition to explain the reason for certain things -- it doesn't feel written "in order". I also don't like that it's not cleanly separated into theorems and proofs -- some of the proof occurs in parts that aren't set off, for instance, and there isn't even a proper main theorem statement! But overall I was able to get through it without a lot of trouble and I'm not even a graph theorist...