> 150 pages is really not very long and there doesn't seem to be too much bloat.
Maybe it's just me, but 150 pages is like third of a good book. Quite long. And it's full of LLM slop, they did not even bother to remove the em dashes.
Sure, but don’t read it like a book, it’s more of a document to skim through
Do you have specific examples you think are LLM-generated? I have only read a few parts, but they did not seem primarily LLM-generated to me. Using em-dashes is really not a good signal for this IMO.
I'm not saying you're wrong btw; I'm sure this has many authors and some of them probably used LLMs significantly in the writing process.