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jnwatsontoday at 4:51 AM1 replyview on HN

I recently wrote a short paper with Fable, and, with some prodding, I was able to get some non-painful prose out of it.

I just found my prompt:

The writing style could really use some work. Avoid Claude-isms like "stated fairly", em dashes, "load-bearing", overly punchy phrasing like "keep the signal, govern the response". This is a technical document, not a marketing campaign.


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mattmansertoday at 7:06 AM

There's a ton more you missed.

Like "It's not x, it's y". It actually has 4 or 5 of those counter-factual, linguistic pause, factual patterns it uses.

"The [goal/ambition/etc.] is larger: statement", is another oft repeated phrase.

And then generally, it loves dramatic pauses in statements like "x exists in y; in practice z". It's the weird punctuation it uses. A massive overuse of colons and semi-colons instead of words like and, but, because, althoughy etc. that humans normally use.

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