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glitchctoday at 7:53 PM2 repliesview on HN

Hemingway wrote the same way. Here's a famous example from the Old Man and the Sea:

Every day is a new day. It is better to be lucky. But I would rather be exact. Then when luck comes you are ready.

The reason is simple: Short sentences are punchy. They hit hard, carry emotional weight.

P.S. As evident, clearly I'm having some fun with this, but the point stands.


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magicalisttoday at 8:31 PM

Short sentences were never the danger, or what the GP is referring to.

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warkdarriortoday at 8:42 PM

Correction:

> The reason is simple. Short sentences are punchy. They hit hard. But they carry emotional weight.