alt Hacker NewsCan I ask which parts? I wrote the intro section by hand, and left the rest of it Fable-generated with significant "guidance" and rounds of re-writing.
I think the current weakest part is the explanation of the science behind it, but I'm curious if there was anything specific that jumped out at you.
generally it helps to make the readme more of a map of content where you have the big picture for each section and then let people dive via links where they want to know more.