Yea the hypothesis seems the exact opposite of what I find with LLM writing. It’s not that it’s overly dense instead I find that it’s hard to read because it’s so information sparse. Like you’re saying it feels optimized to “good writing” not to conveying information.
Yeah; whatever the AIs are doing I wouldn't call it "information dense" like the abstract does. I'd prefer the hypothesis that there are complex patterns in speech related to successfully communication information to a limited human brain and the AIs aren't complex enough to model them yet. Or the signal is being obscured somehow.
I find that it’s both: filled to the brim with facts and numbers, but they’re completely useless and irrelevant. For instance I ask it to come up with some ad copy for an Unreal UI plugin I made and it focuses on things like “Supports 64-bit Windows” or “allows transparent rendering” or lists out-of-context performance numbers.
Of course it supports 64-bit Windows - every Unreal plugin does! They don’t even make 32-bit Windows anymore!